Thursday, 7 May 2020

SHOE MARKER DESCRIPION

He has, GLASSES,MOUSTACHE,SHORT,MAKES SHOES,SAD.

He has his awn shoe store and a good personality 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Cody,
    You have described the Little Shoemaker's appearance and job. I would like to see some more information. The task was for two paragraphs. Why is he sad? What is he wearing? Where does he live? Why is personality good?
    Please take your time.

    Miss Pownall

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  2. The words are going of the page BTW, max

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