Every time you go past a shadow be careful because it might EAT YOU. As a little girl ran down the forest the shadows were following, she saw a castle with light and ran there because the shadows would burn like vampires. So she ran but the shadows were getting closer. Every second she found a stroke of light and ran through it like flash and slowed the shadows down. Finally she made it to the castle she opened the doors and realised that the lights were off. For too long there was a crown on the floor and blood, she knew it was the end.
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 13 May 2020
Shadows
W.A.L.T Describe a character
Every time you go past a shadow be careful because it might EAT YOU. As a little girl ran down the forest the shadows were following, she saw a castle with light and ran there because the shadows would burn like vampires. So she ran but the shadows were getting closer. Every second she found a stroke of light and ran through it like flash and slowed the shadows down. Finally she made it to the castle she opened the doors and realised that the lights were off. For too long there was a crown on the floor and blood, she knew it was the end.
Every time you go past a shadow be careful because it might EAT YOU. As a little girl ran down the forest the shadows were following, she saw a castle with light and ran there because the shadows would burn like vampires. So she ran but the shadows were getting closer. Every second she found a stroke of light and ran through it like flash and slowed the shadows down. Finally she made it to the castle she opened the doors and realised that the lights were off. For too long there was a crown on the floor and blood, she knew it was the end.
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