And there is lots of contact. I play rugby to i have gotten player of the year 3 times in a row. But if you want to become a famous rugby player you got to train. It is really fun you should join
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 29 May 2020
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And there is lots of contact. I play rugby to i have gotten player of the year 3 times in a row. But if you want to become a famous rugby player you got to train. It is really fun you should join
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Hi Cody- thank you for going back and re-looking at your work. This is much better.
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