Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 7 May 2020
SHOE MARKER DESCRIPION
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Cody,
ReplyDeleteYou have described the Little Shoemaker's appearance and job. I would like to see some more information. The task was for two paragraphs. Why is he sad? What is he wearing? Where does he live? Why is personality good?
Please take your time.
Miss Pownall
The words are going of the page BTW, max
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