Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 1 May 2020
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1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Oh no Cody!
ReplyDeleteHe probably should have read the label that said 'in progress'. Well done for using the story starter and creating an awesome story.
Next time- Please try and make sure that you copy and paste your work so that it does not go off the page.
Ka pai- Miss Pownall