Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 24 August 2021
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Cody, you have shared some very interesting facts about tornados. I had no idea that they killed on average 70 people a year. Is there a certain place that tornados happens?
ReplyDeleteI would love for you to layout a post card correctly next time. Starting with Hello and insert their name and then at the end sign off your name "from Cody".
I do love how you have made the address about homework. Next time make sure you give it a capital as it is a name.
Would you ever go tornado watching?