Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 10 August 2020
Pet writting
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Well done Cody. I love the way that you have put your writing into paragraphs. You also have some very interesting points to support why children should have pets.
ReplyDeleteKa pai.