Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 19 June 2020
BAD GUYS.......5
I am going to write a review about a book called...... BAD GUYS....5
The author is... AARON BLABEY
The book is about...ANIMALS TRYING TO BE GOOD BUT...NOT
My favourite part was.... WHEN PIRANNA STARTED EATING HIS FEELINGS AWAY IT WAS FUNNY
My least favourite part was... ''Ohhh we can float'' um Im pretty sure you can float in space.
I would recommend this to someone who likes...BAD GUYS AND COMICS
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Hey Cody I like this post because i like bad guys and its a good review. Maybe next time you could add a little more detail. Maybe you could add some colour aswell.
ReplyDeleteHello Cody, I really like this blog post because you are reviewing about a book.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time don´t do capitals because its like you are shouting and you also probably add a picure of the book.
HAve you seen all the bad guy books and if so which one is your favourite?