A narrative writing is when you have a intro a problem and a solution and some times its fiction.
Death Zone 1
It is 2019 on the 8th of August in San Francisco and Hunk-a-Chunk-a is planning an evil plan to take over the world.
Meanwhile, Peter Parker (Spider-Man) is just a normal boy, except that he is Spider-Man. He is only 16 years old and he is on holiday with his best friend Fred.
’’Do you want to go to the park?’’ said Peter
“Sure” replied Fred.
Beep! Beep! Parker's hologram watch Edith is ringing “Parker the city needs you bring your suit” said Edith inside his watch.
“Yep.” said Peter.
“What about the park?” said Fred it will have to wait i have to go.
While hunk-a-chunk-a is destroying the city and killing everyone but here comes Spider-Man. Spider-Man webs hunk-a-chunk-a in the face but hunk-a-chunk-a grabbed spider-man by foot and threw Spider-man through a building. And smashed into a car which was in a shop for sale then exploded in million pieces…..
FROM CODY
Hi Cody i'm Blair from Lochiel school that is cool Cody i like how you put in Adidas and Nike with people in the danger zone 1.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time add more detail to your photo like them saying something.
Do you like using google drawing if it is google drawing.
Hi Cody,
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic piece of writing. You've set this out really well. Great intro - setting the scene. I also like how you started with 'Meanwhile,' in your second paragraph. I wonder if you can use other words other than 'said'? Keep up the great blogging!
Miss Blair (Room 4)
Lochiel School