Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 23 August 2019
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Hi Cody My name Is Chelsy from Owairaka District School, I love your Slide about Wonderful Wiled Endangered Cats. I love how you put photos Into your Slide. Next time you should put I little Bit More Information. But good Job!!!! If you have time type this In to have a look at my blog http://odschelsy.blogspot.com/ Have A good Week!!! BLOG YA LATER!! ✌👍🙊
ReplyDeleteHi Cody I liked your story, it was interesting to find out about the all of the endangered cats. I don't have any cat but I love animals. I think you could have added more detail about all of the the cats to make it even more interesting.
ReplyDeleteHi Cody my name is Jay Jay from Rawhiti School. I really enjoyed the way you showed what the animals look like in the slides. I my self like animals as well.They are amazing I don't have a cat but they are amazing animals why did you decide to do it about cats.
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